#TeachWriting Archive

#TeachWriting chat is where educators talk about writing instruction. Every other Tuesday @ 9pm ET/8pm CT.

Tuesday February 20, 2018
9:00 PM EST

  • TeachWriting2 - Moderator Feb 20 @ 9:00 PM EST
    Welcome to #TeachWriting, our bi-weekly chat about the teaching of writing! Our guest moderator tonight is @thinkSRSD - take it away, Leslie!
  • ChelleShel617 Feb 20 @ 9:00 PM EST
    Grammar Nerds UNITE! Jump in the ring with Cade and me as we discuss how wrestling with grammar and syntax can help students unlock the writer inside of them. Special guest: @sinandsyntax #teachwriting #makewriting @ncte Hear it on @iTunes @GooglePlay https://t.co/UzzLgqnif8
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:00 PM EST
    Welcome! Excited to start tweeting abt speaking & writing connections. Pls share your bio! I'm Leslie Laud from Mass. I teach teens. I studied wrtr's workshop at Teacher College @TCRWP #teachwriting
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:01 PM EST
    I'm in! Jon Shay, 8th grade ELA and SS in Skokie IL #TeachWriting
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:01 PM EST
    Rob from Dallas. Former English T turned admin #teachwriting
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:01 PM EST
    Q1. What are connections between student talk and writing? #TeachWriting
  • Ed_Stories Feb 20 @ 9:02 PM EST
    Andrea from CT. Taught Eng and journalism for many years; former journalist and currently working in Ed PR & communications. #teachwriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:02 PM EST
    Welcome, Jon! #TeachWriting
    In reply to @mistershayELA
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:02 PM EST
    I’m a Stonehill College alum, Leslie. MA has special place in my heart. #teachwriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD, @TCRWP
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:02 PM EST
    Welcome, Rob! Good to see you here! #TeachWriting
    In reply to @skeeTX
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:03 PM EST
    A1: I find that students see writing as intimidating, so we use their Chromebooks and mobile devices to record oral brainstorms #teachwriting
  • T_HEB Feb 20 @ 9:03 PM EST
    4th & 5th grade school teacher from Maine. Hello #TeachWriting
  • briandurgin Feb 20 @ 9:03 PM EST
    A1: If Ss can talk about it they can write about it. Speech helps to transfer to the “proverbial” page #TeachWriting
  • KellyTumy Feb 20 @ 9:03 PM EST
    Hey, tweeps! Missed you. Kelly from TX. #TeachWriting
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:04 PM EST
    How’ve you been, Ben? Been awhile! #TeachWriting
    In reply to @bkuhl2you
  • T_HEB Feb 20 @ 9:04 PM EST
    A1 Many times we start framing our thinking by "writing on a sea of talk." Just talking the lines floating in our heads opens up possibilities, generates our ideas, reduces anxiety about starting. #TeachWriting
  • KellyTumy Feb 20 @ 9:04 PM EST
    A1: Not nearly enough connections! We need to help kiddos see the connections. More time spent talking leads to stronger writing opportunities. #TeachWriting
  • Ed_Stories Feb 20 @ 9:04 PM EST
    A1Teaching students writing is essentially teaching them to think critically, organize, support arguments and more. Talking through big ideas and supporting evidence in a debate format can serve as a great lead-up to a writing assignment. #TeachWriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:05 PM EST
    Good. Busy. (February is a rough month for some reason. Don't know why. End of a grading period and bad weather. Grr.) You? #TeachWriting
    In reply to @skeeTX
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:05 PM EST
    A1: Ss often prefer talking to writing as they feel more vulnerable/exposed to negative feedback #teachwriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:05 PM EST
    Welcome, Kelly! #TeachWriting
    In reply to @KellyTumy
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:05 PM EST
    Welcome, Tim! Glad you could join us! #TeachWriting
    In reply to @T_HEB
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:05 PM EST
    and they overcome their suspicion that writing is some kind of innate, arcane talent that some people just "have" #teachwriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • WahooDawg Feb 20 @ 9:06 PM EST
    A1 #TeachWriting I envision speaking at both ends of student writing. It is the first movement of inquiry and research and then the delivery of the edited composition.
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:06 PM EST
    A1b: adults/Ts don’t scrutinize their talking as much as their writing. Wonder if the formality of writing discourages Ss early on???? #teachwriting
  • ZSharon Feb 20 @ 9:07 PM EST
    A1 talking is a way of thinking before writing #teachwriting
  • briandurgin Feb 20 @ 9:07 PM EST
    A1: Can be very helpful for ELs #TeachWriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:07 PM EST
    A1 - This is a hard question. It's different for different kids. The strength of the link has a lot of impact on how they feel about writing. If they see a strong link, they often enjoy or like writing, I think. It's as comfortable as talking. Not simple, though. #TeachWriting
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:07 PM EST
    Tough January here. Wife was very sick and both sons had flu. All good now and back to some normalcy! #TeachWriting
    In reply to @bkuhl2you
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:07 PM EST
    A1 verbal read-alouds of drafts also allow students to hear and imagine how their prose sound, how their characters are developing, and how to fill in gaps between what they think they wrote and what they actually wrote #teachwriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:09 PM EST
    A1 - I think it comes down to how they think of the craft of writing vs. the art of speaking. If they see writing as a chance to "say it right" or "make it great," or value the experience and difference of print, it's a different link. #TeachWriting
  • ZSharon Feb 20 @ 9:09 PM EST
    Especially when they can hear their words by someone else :) #teachwriting
    • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:07 PM EST
      A1 verbal read-alouds of drafts also allow students to hear and imagine how their prose sound, how their characters are developing, and how to fill in gaps between what they think they wrote and what they actually wrote #teachwriting
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:09 PM EST
    Do you think if Ts model or Ss share out loud, too many ads try and mirror someone else versus being true to themselves? #TeachWriting
    In reply to @mistershayELA
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:09 PM EST
    Sorry to hear that! Lots of sickness up here. Lots of students out for multiple days. Kind of a mess. Glad everyone is better, though. #TeachWriting
    In reply to @skeeTX
  • T_HEB Feb 20 @ 9:10 PM EST
    A1 Reading aloud to self is a frequent part of our revision process. The ears are pretty tough editors. We have had a few giant ears made of construction paper placed around the room to invite reading aloud. #TeachWriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:11 PM EST
    A1 - It's not a simple link. I think in middle school (where I teach), I work toward the kind of fluency in writing that kids have with speaking. I want a strong link, because I want them to have text to revise. Then we can craft something. #TeachWriting
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:11 PM EST
    As always - varies. Maybe some want convo when stuck. Some want quiet when they need to think deeply. Highlights need for differentiation and self-regulation - helping them learn how to understand what they need & how to advocate for that.... #teachwriting
    • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 8:45 PM EST
      I think a lot depends on what you're writing, how important it is, and how comfortable you are with your process and your progress on the task. Maybe we seek conversation when we're stuck? Maybe some of us prefer to talk about writing more than others? #TeachWriting
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:12 PM EST
    very true! we talk about writing as building a bridge-- the writer thinks they've built a good one, but the reader sees a messy pile of stones. a read-aloud shows this to the writer. #teachwriting
    In reply to @T_HEB
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:12 PM EST
    Q2. How can we guide talk to support learning, and writing development?#teachwriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:12 PM EST
    Model, scaffold, celebrate and use student models? Encourage them to look to the mentor texts or models instead of the scaffolds after that? #TeachWriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • WahooDawg Feb 20 @ 9:13 PM EST
    #TeachWriting A1 speaking is crawling, drafting is walking, editing is running and public speaking is the Olympics!
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:13 PM EST
    We "use the force" wherein one student reads a punctuacted passage and the partner adds puncutation. They learn to sense the rhythm and the punctuation that creates it #teachwriting
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:13 PM EST
    #teachwriting Love it! I'd been thinking of talk before writing to prep for wrtg. But talk during wrtg and even after drafts - all contribute and help
    • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:07 PM EST
      A1 verbal read-alouds of drafts also allow students to hear and imagine how their prose sound, how their characters are developing, and how to fill in gaps between what they think they wrote and what they actually wrote #teachwriting
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:14 PM EST
    A2: talking can ease the tension when fully engrossed in the process. Ss often stress a/b the grade. Talking/conferencing/revisiting can make the work seem less intimidating #teachwriting
  • KellyTumy Feb 20 @ 9:15 PM EST
    A2: The more we connect reading, writing, listening, and speaking the more literate student we are growing. Ss need to see the skills together. #TeachWriting
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:15 PM EST
    so key. they'll say of their own writing, "I wrote that!" but then when they hear it read back to them, they hear what they left out #teachwriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • ZSharon Feb 20 @ 9:15 PM EST
    A2 Teach a student to write helps them learn form; teach a student to think gives that form substance. #teachwriting
  • briandurgin Feb 20 @ 9:15 PM EST
    A2:Create spaces where discussion is fostered. Use engaging real life problems. #TeachWriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:15 PM EST
    Agree - but at some point they need to notice the differences and work to perfect their writing. But yes, speaking and writing feed each other. #TeachWriting
    In reply to @briandurgin
  • WahooDawg Feb 20 @ 9:16 PM EST
    A2 I encourage storytelling of student processes, and sampling of student work as read aloud so in small groups or pairs: especially coupled with walking or movement if possible. #TeachWriting
  • KellyTumy Feb 20 @ 9:16 PM EST
    A2: How many times do we ask students just to TALK about what they’ve read? We default to writing as an easy assignment instead of letting them talk and process first. #TeachWriting
  • briandurgin Feb 20 @ 9:16 PM EST
    So powerful for all Ss and content areas. #teachwriting
    • KellyTumy Feb 20 @ 9:15 PM EST
      A2: The more we connect reading, writing, listening, and speaking the more literate student we are growing. Ss need to see the skills together. #TeachWriting
  • JoelRGarza Feb 20 @ 9:16 PM EST
    A2 #teachwriting Try to talk to each S as often as possible about something other than your class. Demonstrate that their opinions on many things matter to you
  • teatertweets Feb 20 @ 9:16 PM EST
    A1. I think of free-writing as a conversation, even if at first the writer is the only audience. This allows the writer time to think and process without having to make the work meaningful before they even know what they want to say. #TeachWriting
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:17 PM EST
    We write what's called a 6-room poem, borrowed from Rainer Maria Rilke. Writers travel through six rooms to notice one specific element (mood, lighting, etc.) #teachwriting It gives them a framework for developing context and backstory.
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:18 PM EST
    A2 - I think our students need to see us talking about our writing in productive or useful ways. I think they need to hear the kinds of things that writers say about their writing - moves, purpose, audience, word choice or sentence structure - think aloud stuff. #TeachWriting
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:20 PM EST
    Q3. What is the value of text-based discussion? #teachwriting
  • T_HEB Feb 20 @ 9:20 PM EST
    Modeling our writing is essential to so many aspects of #TeachWriting. I post organizers and drafts on the wall and use them to make my thinking transparent during mini workshops.
    In reply to @bkuhl2you
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:20 PM EST
    Just sentence starters or sentence frames. Not much more than that - haven't used student models for talk - like a recording? I've recorded a few conversations and played them, so I guess so. #TeachWriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:21 PM EST
    A2 The Arcade Fire partnered with Google to create an interactive vidoe that adapts to the viewer's zipcode. Students watch and create written narration as it explores their own neighborhoods https://t.co/BxPKaKZ5Eg #teachwriting
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:22 PM EST
    A3 invaluable. students learn to love--and to critique--good writing by engaging with texts, moving beyond plot or main idea and learning how good writers engage their audiences #teachwriting
  • ZSharon Feb 20 @ 9:22 PM EST
    A3 Text-based discussion forces Ss to commit to their opinions. IMHO, the key learning element for Ts is supporting disagreement and/or changing their minds. #teachwriting
  • KellyTumy Feb 20 @ 9:23 PM EST
    A3: Text-based discussion is one component of a classroom. Do you know how much you learn about kids on Monday if you ask, how was the weekend and engage in genuine convo? #TeachWriting
  • WahooDawg Feb 20 @ 9:23 PM EST
    A3 I teach 1st year college students and speaking for them is often full of terror. A google doc or a discussion board or even some post its can free thoughts to live in the community of writers that would remain hidden if speech were the only outlet. #TeachWriting
  • JoelRGarza Feb 20 @ 9:24 PM EST
    A3 #teachwriting Can't imagine a writing workshop without it--whether in Google docs or via @hypothes_is annotation.
  • T_HEB Feb 20 @ 9:24 PM EST
    A3 Discussing mentor texts allows S writers to explore author craft and build their writer's toolbox. Sharing their thoughts & opinions of text invites them to find support within the text. #TeachWriting
  • T_HEB Feb 20 @ 9:26 PM EST
    The same thought has cross my mind. Am I boxing my students in by sharing my draft? I have been delaying the reading of my lines by a few days to allow my S writers to "breath." #TeachWriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:26 PM EST
    A3 - It's a useful way to introduce new writing styles, new voices, new ideas, new genres, and to reinforce the reading/writing/speaking/listening connection that @KellyTumy just brought up. It's also a way to encourage them to explore writing. #TeachWriting
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:27 PM EST
    Can you say more? This post strikes me. I'd always seen wrtr's workshop as primarily personal narrative/personal response. Text-based was new for me. Love this thinking. #teachwriting
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:28 PM EST
    That was my concern when I was still in the classroom #TeachWriting
    In reply to @T_HEB, @thinkSRSD
  • WahooDawg Feb 20 @ 9:28 PM EST
    A3: It could be framed as thinking with our hands. #TeachWriting
  • JoelRGarza Feb 20 @ 9:29 PM EST
    Maybe I misunderstood the Q : ) But having a place for disc of mentor-text to live allows for Ss to be fully present during the conversation, and allows the T to know in advance what parts of a text interested Ss (before they go off to write on their own) #teachwriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:29 PM EST
    A3 - I have a book of side-by-side English/Spanish versions of some of Neruda's odes. It's a really cool way to show my (often Spanish-speaking) students the way that poetry is translated (and awesome in both languages). It's a great lesson. #TeachWriting
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:29 PM EST
    Q4. What scaffolds support text-based talk (that will lead to better writing), ie vocabulary word boxes, sentence starters? #teachwriting
  • T_HEB Feb 20 @ 9:30 PM EST
    I like to add notes to the margins of my draft inspired by what I hear from my students. Writers inspiring writers! Perhaps that exchange of ideas keeps my T draft from being the target for Ss. #TeachWriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD, @skeeTX
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:31 PM EST
    Agree but I’m starting to see rubrics/models as limiting the Ss, almost confining them as many still try to please the T or follow a prescribed formula #TeachWriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD, @T_HEB
  • T_HEB Feb 20 @ 9:32 PM EST
    Most certainly. Spelling errors, arrows to reorganize content, and poorly executed skill are all highlighted. Draft writing is messy. Ss enjoy having me point out my mistakes but I think they like finding them more. #TeachWriting
    In reply to @WahooDawg
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:32 PM EST
    Rain and storms all day and my golden doodle needs to go outside! Navigating her while tweeting!!! Good times #teachwriting
  • WahooDawg Feb 20 @ 9:33 PM EST
    A4 writing prompts are frames and supports. I also think of peer review (after some coaching) as text based talk. Twitter and othe chatroom software and apps, are another prime tool for such scaffolding of learning. #TeachWriting
  • teatertweets Feb 20 @ 9:33 PM EST
    A2. We can guide talk to support learning and writing development by instructing students in giving meaningful feedback to each other. Also by asking students questions about their work and their process, encouraging them and helping them to clarify their message. #TeachWriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:34 PM EST
    A4 - It's hard for me, but it's important to share manageable pieces of text. I think we often want to share longer texts, but it's harder for kids to work with larger pieces of texts when we want them to do something new and challenging with it. It depends. #TeachWriting
  • ASharpTeacher Feb 20 @ 9:34 PM EST
    @BridgetFarr saw this and thought of your classes; what a cool approach Have u tried this before? https://t.co/SZjA6kJopE #2ndaryela @AISDwrites #teachwriting
  • JoelRGarza Feb 20 @ 9:35 PM EST
    Uh, yes to all : ) The guidance is usually S-directed: Tell me two things that inspired you and that you hope to incorporate--a tone, a rhet device, a phrase, etc. I'll be transparent about what I'm choosing to model and how well I thought it went #TeachWriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:35 PM EST
    A4 - I think I should clarify. I don't mean we should cut up everything we share. But if we want to do leads, for example, maybe we only share the first three sentences. Or even just the first sentence. (No matter how great it is or how much we love it.) #TeachWriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:39 PM EST
    A4 - As a middle school teacher, I also sometimes share models of complex sentences (a la Jeff Anderson) and encourage kids to use them. They can often explain complex causal relationships in speaking, but much less often in writing. #grammarmakesusthink #TeachWriting
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:40 PM EST
    I've talked about it before, but I shared models of a "cause-effect sentence," a complex sentence starting with IF, SINCE, or BECAUSE. #TeachWriting
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:41 PM EST
    Q5. How do you collect formative data on talk, that can inform your next teaching moves? #teachwriting (How do you know if your focus on developing talk is impacting Ss wrtg?)
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:41 PM EST
    Give 'em a series of 3-5 very short sentences and ask them to combine into one long one using commas and semicolons, adding or changing words, etc. You can then discuss how their versions differ in meaning and emphasis #grammarmakesusthinkg #teachwriting
    In reply to @bkuhl2you
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:41 PM EST
    Sure. An example might be the opening of BLIND SIDE, where Michael Lewis narrates the famous tackle and injury of Joe Theismann by Lawrence Taylor. I've tried to share pages of the story, and kids got lost. It was just too much. #TeachWriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:42 PM EST
    Because students have probably been told otherwise, please show them that they can in fact start with "Because..." #teachwriting #grammarpolice
    In reply to @bkuhl2you
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:43 PM EST
    It's a great model, but I tried to use it with 7th graders, and it was too hard. As a read-aloud, maybe. The goal would be to show them a narrative lead or introduction in a nonfiction essay. It would be a mini-lesson on ways to start an essay or something. #TeachWriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:45 PM EST
    Sorry, I wasn't clear. I was trying to say that kids can talk their way through cause/effect, but they sometimes struggle to explain it clearly in writing. Jeff does say it should be written - I'm trying to connect their speaking w/their writing. #TeachWriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:46 PM EST
    Yeah, I've had a few students who didn't believe me. Like there was some kind of law that they were breaking. #TeachWriting
    In reply to @mistershayELA
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:47 PM EST
    Bring down #grammarpolice Agreed! I tell me Ss to break the rules if they want to for impact. Just tell me they know they broke the rule, and explain to me why - what impact were you trying for. #norules #teachwriting
    In reply to @mistershayELA, @bkuhl2you
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:49 PM EST
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:49 PM EST
    Q6. What resources help you craft questions to guide discussions, discussions that will then lead to writing? #teachwriting
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:50 PM EST
    I've used Fischer & Frey TDQs book to help me guide discussions before writing #teachwriting
  • KellyTumy Feb 20 @ 9:51 PM EST
    I say in almost every training I do, “Just because you can answer a prompt doesn’t mean you are a writer. Answering a prompt is a learned habit...real writing is craft...art” #TeachWriting
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:52 PM EST
    Is it necessarily learned or are some writers gifted just as an athlete or musician might be? #teachwriting
    In reply to @KellyTumy
  • teatertweets Feb 20 @ 9:52 PM EST
    A3. Text-based discussion can allow the writing process to feel like more of a collaboration. The writer can receive feedback quickly. #TeachWriting
  • mistershayELA Feb 20 @ 9:53 PM EST
    sorry, y'all-- I have to bow out early. Thanks for a great exchange. I hope I gave as good as I got! #teachwriting
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:53 PM EST
    yes - read this earlier. I worry the 5 para essay is a straw man in these types of articles. Who cares how many para's? I just want to look at the meaning inside the para's #teachwriting
    In reply to @skeeTX
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:55 PM EST
    I think many great wrtg Ts are fine with 5 para's as long as the content is deep & meaningful. I worry about debates abt # of para's. We need to debate the content of the wrtg. My Ss use 5 para's sometimes. That doesn't matter - matters what mng they make on the pg #teachwriting
    In reply to @skeeTX
  • JoelRGarza Feb 20 @ 9:55 PM EST
    I mean, if your argument has three necessary components, why NOT a 5-paragraph structure, right? #TeachWriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD, @skeeTX
  • skeeTX Feb 20 @ 9:55 PM EST
    I just want to know what Ss think and have Ts help them craft it to be the Ss best work #teachwriting
    In reply to @thinkSRSD
  • KellyTumy Feb 20 @ 9:55 PM EST
    I do think prompt answering can be learned, for a nonpracticed writer (State 😶 Testing) And that real Writing, given the opportunity, can be a nicely honed skill, real art. I also think some writers are just born with the talent. #teachwriting
    In reply to @skeeTX
  • crottymark Feb 20 @ 9:57 PM EST
    Reminiscent of blog post I once wrote: https://t.co/UNRRPEUxai #teachwriting
    In reply to @skeeTX
  • bkuhl2you Feb 20 @ 9:58 PM EST
    Feel like I should read it before we talk about it. #TeachWriting
    In reply to @skeeTX
  • thinkSRSD Feb 20 @ 9:59 PM EST
    TY everyone! Always leave these feeling so uplifted and connected. Really appreciate the community! See you at next chat & in between on twitter :-) #teachwriting
  • WahooDawg Feb 20 @ 9:59 PM EST
    A6 Peter Smagorinsky, the Internet, tv shows, music. Everything is interesting when we think of it a new way. #teachwriting